Editing of Writing!

Original: Once back in 1879 a family made a mansion they loved it. once they all died in 1956 my family moved in 1 year later. WOW the house is huge i say I like how its in the middle of willow forest and a pond out in front of the house says Alex. Alex is my brother.

Mine:Once back in 1879 a family made a mansion. once they all died my family moved in. WOW the house is huge and I like how its in the middle of willow forest I say. Well i like how it has a pond out in front of the house says Alex. Alex is my brother.