Thermometer Project and Temperature!!!!

Lochie and I have been learning about Thermometers , How they work and what the have in them. The have a liquid called  Mercury and Alcohol.  Mercury and Alcohol grow bigger when they get hotter but when they get colder they in large ALOT. This has been very interesting and I have learnt alot. 

Mud...  

As I slip and slide down the bank I hear the thumping athletes going past. Don’t stand on me please. There’s Bob over there he doesn't mind. Well I don’t think so... Atlast their gone. Wait I hear something coming AHHHH oh wait it’s just a little worm. Then I hear something there really is a person he’s going to stand on me NOOOOOO!!!! Splat AHHHHHH i’m in little pieces. Heres some more athletes they all stand on me SPLISH SPLOSH oh great now i’m in millions of little pieces. Phew the race is over now i’m all dry and hard. So much for a sunny day not. Wait what’s that noise I hear the speaker 1st place...  SPLAT ah bird poo now I stink as well. And I didn’t get hear 1st place.

Dear Mum & Dad

Ronaldo or Messi T-shirt!!!!

Don’t you just love having a awesome t-shirt to wear like Cristiano Ronaldo or Lionel Messi. Well I do!!!!!!! I strongly believe that I should get a T-shirt because… I really want one like seriously and they only cost like 30 dollars.

Firstly I am a soccer player and I like and play like Ronaldo / Messi. And we can go to a Barcelona FC soccer game and get it SIGNED!!!!

And it would also be really cool if I could if I can get a photo with Ronaldo or Messi.

If you don’t feel sorry for me yet then read this Secondly I would love to go to a Barcalona FC game and hopefully catch a ball. With all the signatures. And take it home put it on a stand to make it memorable.

And lastly if I had one I would look like I am a really big supporter or fan. And I would LOVE LOVE LOVE 5 passes to the 2018 FIFA world cup held in Russia that Ronaldo and Messi play in PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! Can you get me ONE!!!!!

Now all im saying is that I really want one for the stated reasons above I hope I can get one soon or for my birthday!!!!

Yours Sincerely Max      

Cross Country Goal 2015!!!!

My Cross Country Goal For 2015

My goal is to get 1st 2nd or 3rd. Because my Dad and Mum said the would give me 20 dollars if I got into districts and if I got 1st 2nd or 3rd in districts 50 DOLLARS so I am going to try the hardest I can go to get the CHA - CHING. 

My goal for my next piece of persuasive writing

My goal for my next piece of persuasive writing

1. My conclusion summarises my main point & viewpoint.
2. I need persuasive language and emotive words.
3. I need to exaggerate on my facts and questions.
4. More reasons.