Dear Mum & Dad
Ronaldo or Messi T-shirt!!!!
Don’t you just love having a awesome t-shirt to wear like Cristiano Ronaldo or Lionel Messi. Well I do!!!!!!! I strongly believe that I should get a T-shirt because… I really want one like seriously and they only cost like 30 dollars.
Firstly I am a soccer player and I like and play like Ronaldo / Messi. And we can go to a Barcelona FC soccer game and get it SIGNED!!!!
And it would also be really cool if I could if I can get a photo with Ronaldo or Messi.
If you don’t feel sorry for me yet then read this Secondly I would love to go to a Barcalona FC game and hopefully catch a ball. With all the signatures. And take it home put it on a stand to make it memorable.
And lastly if I had one I would look like I am a really big supporter or fan. And I would LOVE LOVE LOVE 5 passes to the 2018 FIFA world cup held in Russia that Ronaldo and Messi play in PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! Can you get me ONE!!!!!
Now all im saying is that I really want one for the stated reasons above I hope I can get one soon or for my birthday!!!!
Yours Sincerely Max
next time you can make the ideas more seperate.
ReplyDeleteGood job at exagerating.
next time you can make the ideas more seperate.
ReplyDeleteGood job at exagerating.
you used your persuasive language really good.
ReplyDeleteYou are appealing to your parents. You hope they want you to be a better soccer player. Some of your persuasive language could be different, instead of using love,love,love. Have a look at the word slide we shared with you
ReplyDeleteI really think you should get one by the way when's you birthday
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